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大学英语四六级重点体裁范文赏析与点评:范文赏析(一)


文章类别:论文技巧   作者:W          发布时间:2021-09-25      


题目:

My View on Fake Commodities

(1)假冒伪劣产品充斥市场;

(2)假冒伪劣商品的危害;

(3)怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。

 

My View on Fake Commodities


Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market. Wherever you are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them. In other words, it is highly probable that you have bought some of those fake goods or products of inferior quality. Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market. On the other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people's precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust. Then, what should be done to do away with fake commodities?

To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection programand strengthen its enforcement policies. Secondly, honest businessmenshould modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of theirintellectual property right. Most important of all, we consumers willhave to do a better job of learning how to distinguish between thegenuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones.In oneword, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fakecommodities.


点评:

该文为问题一解决型的议论文。开头段阐明假冒伪劣产品充斥我们日常生活的现状;主体段从两方面阐述了假冒伪劣产品造成的危害;结尾段从三个方面提出了杜绝假冒伪劣产品的措施。该文内容充实、逻辑性强,使用逻辑关联词in other words, on the onehand, on the other hand, as a consequence, in one word等保持上下文的连贯。

 

好句赏析


Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of themarket.

现如今,假冒伪劣产品充斥着市场的每个角落。

As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources,endangered people's precious life and health, and in the long run erodedpublic trust.

结果,它们浪费了可耗竭的资源,危及了人们宝贵的生命和健康,从长远来看也削弱了公众的信任。

Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better jobof learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney anddefinitely say no to the fake ones.

更为最重要的是,我们消费者必须学会更好地辨别真假,坚定地对假冒伪劣产品说“不”。



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